WATSON The professor? The one you've been ranting about for six months? The mathematician?
Rewrite the cigar shop scene. Have your hero and villain discuss something banal (sports, weather) while implying murder. The script’s trick is subtext . Not a single threat is spoken aloud, yet the reader is terrified. sherlock holmes a game of shadows script full
That is the heart of the mystery. And it is all on the page. WATSON The professor